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mochisharePage 1
- Maybe just Aaah instead of Aa-ah?
- "Let's split into two groups and run."
Page 6
- "It seems your physical ability doesn't amount to much" might work better.
Page 11
- "She takes another's form" -- instead of anothers.
Page 12
- "So, what am I supposed to do..."
- "Give him the finishing blow, then, Lily."
Page 16
- "How long do you intend to sit on top of a girl!?" no For!
- "Hah, who's a woman? You're just a tanuki who's taken that form."
- "I know this guy who refuses to kill."
Page 17
- "Ohh... I see now."
- Maybe just Aaah instead of Aa-ah?
- "Let's split into two groups and run."
Page 6
- "It seems your physical ability doesn't amount to much" might work better.
Page 11
- "She takes another's form" -- instead of anothers.
Page 12
- "So, what am I supposed to do..."
- "Give him the finishing blow, then, Lily."
Page 16
- "How long do you intend to sit on top of a girl!?" no For!
- "Hah, who's a woman? You're just a tanuki who's taken that form."
- "I know this guy who refuses to kill."
Page 17
- "Ohh... I see now."
